Jesenia


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**

Start writing here. -> When I came home George helped me do my homework.He said I did a great job .After my homework we ate dinner and he loved my moms food. He said it was the best.After that we started to watch N C I S. He loved that episode that we watched.After we watched the episode we played hide and go seek with my little sister Amara.George loves to play hide and go seek. Me and George went to look at all the pictures that I have.I interduced**(introduced)** George to Coco and Marshmelo.George said he likes Coco and Marshmelo. Now he has new friends and he loves hanging out with them. My mommy said she loves having George over.I showed George the big bell that I have in my house. I said George can ring the bell and he did. He liked the sound .My older sister Alexus she said that George was very funny.George sang HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my MOMMY. We ate cake. He loved it because it was choclate cake .He said it was tastey**(tasty)** .My mommy said it is time for bed so I put George into bed first. He fell to sleep faster than me. I gave George his blankie and he said it was soft .My mommy said GOOD NIGHT to all of us .George had a bad nightmr**(nightmare)** so he woke up and I did too.He started to cry because he was very scared of the dark.He fell asleep after I sang a lulby**(lullaby)**. I really like your writing. You seem to be able to communicate very well through your words. Keep up this great work. I did not know you were such a singer, and that you could sing lullabies. I think that you should sing a solo for us one day. I hope you are ready for Koda. He will need you to sing him to sleep.**
 * Jesenia,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->When i got home me and koda did my homework. My mommy said that koda is cutter than george. I said they are both cute. My sister said he is stupid. Me and koda watched wendy wu. Then we were finding him a bed. We fond him a spot but he did not like it. So we put him in my purse. My sister said she wanted to keep him but I said NO. After that I shuved him in a gore and that was his bed. We had a hola a hop compitishion. My mom yelled at me and she got really mad so I said your safe with me. And he cried and he got alot of water on the floor. My big fat brother Kevin Jr. toke s to burger king.