Morgan

====**What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.** George and I went on the bus from school to home. My mom saw George when I got to the bus stop. On the bus my friend Jada saw George in my jacket when I was holding him and I told her that I could put her in my report about the bus. I had fun on the bus. When I got home, I was going to start my home work when my dad called for us to pick him up from work. The animals I had were in the car. We picked up my dad. When I got to my dads work I buckled them up. Then we went home and I finshed my homework with George and my pet dog Hershey by my side. Befor**(before)** I did anything I took a picher(**picture)** with George and my stuffed animals. Then we ate dinner. We ate sausage and green beans. George liked the meal. We had fun at dinner. When George and I woke up we ate breafest. We had eggs,bakon,and toast. George liked the breafest we had. At nite**(night)** George and I went to bed (with my dog named Hershey) and I tucked them in. We had fun at nite. My favorite part with George was when George and I walked home from school and George was in my jaket and I was holding George in my hands. My other favorte part with George and I went to bed with my dog Hershey and my other stuffed animals. I would like to go on vacation with George to the jungle or my friends house so he can make friends. George would be so happy to see and make new friends. George made friends. The friends he made were the cholote**(chocolate)** lab,the bullfrog,the easter duck,the panda,my toy rabbit,and my build a bear. He made alot of good friends. My friend Korin has the same monkey and this moring I showed the monkey to her and she liked it. She showed me her monkey and I liked it. I think he made a new friend on the bus and at my house. I think he had fun! I wish that I could play with George agian because we had so much fun! My pets new friends and they would like to see George agian. Oh!,and when I put him into bed he fell out like 2 or 3 times or 2-3 or 4 times. But anyway I was able to pick him up and put him back in bed (with my dog named Hershey) and we all went to bed good,and safe. We were good at bed. George and I had a great time toghter**(together)** and I would like to see George agian. When I am with Koda, I bet that we would have as much as I did with George.====

The End. I like how you did not leave any details out of your writing. I can't believe you left George fall out of bed. I hope he didn't get hurt. Are you sure you didn't push him out, haha? I think you and Koda will have just as much or more fun then you and George. Just be nice to Koda at bed time.**
 * Morgan,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here:> First, I went on the bus and I took a picher of Koda,Jada,Lexi. I showed koda to the bus driver, he said, he liked it. When I went home I showed Koda to my mommy and she took a picher with coda and my dog Hershey. He made friends, when he took a picher. They are,: Hershey,air-baby,bunnys,easter duck,panda,bullfrog,barking dog,Flower,and Strawery. They also made friends with my mommy and my daddy. We went to the mall but I left her in the car so she would not get hurt or get stolen. We went home and I took alot of pichers,played my clarenet. Before we went to pick up my dad we ate a bagle.(that I cut and put creamcheese on and I cut,Hershey and Koda helped me make make it.) We ate bagles at home. We went to bed and he fell out only once. I tryed to take a picher with my Koda,Hershey,and I but I took a messed up the picher and I have to erase the pichers I took. Koda drove with his friend in the car and played with him wile I was at the mall. I played with Koda on the coumputer and we had so much fun,I bought him food,played with him. He liked the food that I gave him. We spun the Wheel Of Wow,played with at the Wishing Well,we went to the arcarde,and I bought him a Christmas tree,a big hat, and a belt. We had so much fun! I liked playing with Koda! If I could be a anamial I would be a frog. The reason is because I could hop all over the place,jump on logs,Jump on lilly pads,and frogs are my favorite animals. I would have so much fun being a frog. First, I would make a new froggy friend. Next, I would go to froggy friend. Then, I would have froggy fun. Last, I would try to be froggy good! I would do all these things and make shure it would be froggy fun to do all of these things. Ya!

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