Elizabeth


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the**

First we went on the bus. He liked that.When we got home he ment**(met)** my two sisters, dad, mom, and my two dogs. He road on my dogs back. Then we went up to my room and we read a book. He like the book. After that we wached TV. Then we played.We played lots of things. Then he met my 4 webkinz Lilly, Kaly, CoCo, and Sally. They played together. We went on my 4 webkinz and played games and feed**(fed)** them. Then we got off and played games with my sister. After we played, my dad got pizza from Pizza Hut. It was good. Then we got ready to go to the pirade**(parade)**. We dressed in warm close**(clothes)** because it was cold outside. When we went there we had to wait. We saw fire trucks, poice**(police)**, browny troops, and lots of other things. We got so much candy that it coud last for days. Then we went home. I did not get to eat the candy because it was time for beb**(bed)**. So we got ready and said good night and brushed our teeth. In the morning we got dressed brushed our teeth and ate. We played too untill we had to go outside and wait for the bus. Then the bus came and we road on it, he like it. I sat with my friends. They liked George. We had so much fun. I think George must have had a blast at the parade. I think that was the first parade he has ever gone to. You two seemed to have a great time together. I like how you added a lot of details to you story. Just watch some of your words that you misspelled. Keep up the good work and get ready for Koda.**
 * Elizabeth,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.--> I would be a Jack raibbt because they are fast. First we went on the bus and when we got home I showed him my sisters,mom,dad,and dogs. We did home work.Then we went up to my room and showed him what I got for Christmas. Then I showed him my 6 other webkinz Lilly,Gallop,Noel,Coco,Kaly, Sally. Then I tolled him what I did with George. Then we played games.Then we played with my 2 sisters Abby, and Grace.We played Hide and seek,red light green light, and mother may I. Then we went on my 6 other webkinz. After that I taked to my frind Amber on the phone. And then I then talked to Rockanne. Then I read a story to him. After we did that we wached TV. then We whent to the park. We had lots of fun. Then we went shopping at the Mall.Then it was time for dinner we ate chicken. After dinner I had Hotchocolate. Then we took pictures. After we did that It was time for bed.I gave him a blue blanket. We got ready. In the morning we got ready brushed are teeth, brushed hair. Then my mom made breakfast we had egg sandwiches. Then we took more pictures and wached TV. We played some more. Then it was time for the bus so we went to wait at my bus stop. Then bus came and we got on it and sat with my 2 friend sam and hannah. Then we got to school I gave the camra to Mr. Bigley and he put a picture on the wrighting page then we started wrighting then we did spelling, math science,Grammer. Then we went to lunch. Then we had tech. Then he helped me packup. Then I said good by and gave him to the next person.