Gabriella

====**What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**====

Start writing here. ->George and I, after school did our homework and then went to Arby's. My little sister got to pick. It was me, George, Abby, Val, MaKeena, and my mommy. Then, I needed gloves for tomorrow. So we went to Target. Instead of getting gloves we just bought clothes. George was helping me pick out clothes. Then, we went home and brushed are**(our)** teeth. Then I made George a bed. He liked it. Then we woke up and ate breakfest. George ate a bannannah**(banana)**, and I ate a bosten cream donut. Then, we brushed our teeth and hair and got dressed. Then, we got are**(our)** bookbag and left the door and came to school. George and I had a great time. What did George have at Arbby's? I hope you did not forget to feed him dinner. How did Abigail like George? She probably wants to take care of him too. My one suggestion for you would be don't start every sentence with the word "then". Other than that I think it was a great journal entry. Make sure your next one is even better!**
 * Gabby,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.--> After school George and I did my spelling homework, and then went to my friends house Quinny and played with her little sister Aiden and played with her dog Bear. Bear licked me alot. By the time we played and messed with her little sister Aiden we went to Subway and I ate an atalian hogie Quinny ate a atalian hogie too. Also her mom ate nothing and her little sister ate ham and cheese hogie and Koda ate what I ate. After that Quinn, her mom, and Aiden dropped me off at my house. They stayed for a while. Then they left and me, my mom, and my little sister MaKeena started to take pictures of Koda. Then we got ready for bed. We brushed our teeth and picked out my outfit. Turned on the tv and then went to bed. We woke up the next morning and got ready for school. After we ate and did all that stuff we grabbed my bookbag and left the door.