Little+Leo+8

Great job. I like how you you used a lot of details and had fun with Little Leo. I just hope he did not eat my Thin Mints. The one suggestion I have for you when is for when you are typing. Make sure you put two spaces between punctuation mark and the next sentence. Keep up the good work and enjoy the rest of the day with him.
 * What did you and Little Leo do together? Make sure you read over your journal entry about Cuddles and look for suggestions that I made. Do not make the same mistakes. Also, make sure you use details in your story but not too many. Start Writing here--** First**** Little Leo and I got picked up by my dad.Then**(, we had fish sticks for dinner.)** we had dinner for dinner we had fish stick. Little Leo said he had never had fish stick but when he had them he said they were great.After that we had glazed donuts. He said they were great too**(This is the correct for of too. Good job!)**.Then**** my mom picked us up.Then**** we had to go back to her work to get the Thin Mints for the teachers.**(I am glad you picked them up for me!)**Little Leo and I had some Thin Mints. Little Leo really liked them.**(I hope he did not eat mine.)**Then**** Little Leo meet**(met)** my Aunt.Little Leo said he liked her.Then**** we played some games.After that we took a shower.Then**** we had a snack before we went to bed.Before bed I read Little Leo a story.It was called the Biggest Snowman Ever.In the morning for breakfast we had a pop-tart.Then**,** we got ready for school.After that we went to the bus stop.Then**** the bus picked us up.Then**,** we went to school.Then**,** when we got to school we walked to school.Little Leo said he does not like to walk.I walked with some of my friends **and** I introduced Little Leo to them. He said he likes them.
 * Marisa,

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