Yahairali


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**

Start writing here. -> We ate icecream. We went to the park. We went on the swings. George and I like to play the game Candyland. We would like to go to Puerto Rico for our vacation because it is hot. Keep working hard with your writing. I think you added all the important details you could, but I would like you more feeling into your writing. I want to know what you where thinking, and how you really felt. I do believe that you and Koda will have a great time together. I hope you are ready for him.**
 * Yahairali,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had.  Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->