Taya


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**

Start writing here. ->The first thing George and I did was watching TV.We were watching Drake and Josh.Then we went to my grandmothers house.We played with her dog Boomer.George liked him.After that,we went home.We played my DS.George loved basketball.Then we were fulling around with my cat Tiki.I think she liked George.I know George liked her. After all of that we ate pizza.Then we got showers.We had a banana,then we had some icecream for desert.Then befor**(before)** we went to bed I introduced George to my cow.Her name is Bell.When we woke up we ate ceral**(cereal)**. George liked the coco rice.Then we went to Y care.We had fun there.We played with alot of my friends.We had a really good time! I think you and George had a really great time together. It sounds like Tiki wanted to take George out on a date. I am glad you protected George from that. I want you to try to remember to put spaces between the end of a sentence and the Beginning of the next word. That will help space your work out so it does not look like it is running together. I hope you are ready for Koda. I wonder if Tiki likes bears?**
 * Taya,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->The first thing Koda and I did was going to my grandmothers. Then we went to a baby shower, it was very fun. After that we went to my moms house,we watched alot of movies with her friend Amanda, and we stayed up until two in the morning. When we got to my house the next day we played DS,Koda liked the game Mario Kart. Then after that we played Mario Kart on the Wii. Koda enjoyed playing with my Webkinz Bell,Leo,Edward,Arwin,and Kaitie. Then we played with my DS again,until we had to go to bed. When we got up we went down stairs and played with Tiki,then we ate breakfast. When we wen to Y Care we played with my friends Amy,Emily,and Angela.