Skyler

What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**
 * jhh

Start writing here. -After Day Care I went to my mom's house.Then we went to a Freedom"s football game. Thay**(They)** versd**(versed)** Northampton. Freedom wone**(won)**. We saw my mom and my frends acrose**(across)** the street.George liked the football game. So did I. We would like to go to Hawaii. You did some nice writing. I like how you added your mother into it and how you explained where you went. George likes football games. I want you to work on writing more for me next time. I know that you had to do more. Don't forget to tell me what you had for dinner and anything else you want to share. Keep up the great work and get ready for Koda.**
 * Skyler,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->When I got to Day Care Kodad and I ate snack after that I did homwork and left. After we Ieft we went to a restrant called Ground Round and whent home.We got in our P.Js we wached a movie called The Little Rascals.Ore faverit part was when the kids crashed into a notherer car. After that we went to sleep.We woke up in the morning and had aggs bacion and cheese.We would like to go to Disney.