Roxanne


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**

Start writing here. ->When I got home I unpacked my homework and started it.Then I went to my room and started jumping on my bed. After that me and George played hiding-go-seek for an hour. After we played hiding go seek, we went to the park to swing. Then I saw my friends Zac, Cody, Ray and Kayla. Then we started to play basketball for 25 minutes.Then me and geogre practiced my flute and I let George try to play my flute. He's better then me. George met my parents, my brother and sister, my two dogs, our seven fish and my three other webkinz. Then we played Battle stations with my friend Zac.Then me and my friend Kayla played birdy in the tennis court. Then we had cheese potatoes, ham, and green beans. And me and George went to the movies with my friends Zac, Cody, Ray, and Kayla. We watched Ghost town and it was so funny. After went to my house. I built a fort for me and my four webkinz Cazy, Cookie, and Pumpkin. Now george has more friends. After that we went to bed and George was so happy that we went to bed. The next morning I woke up and got dressed and ate breakfast with George. We had Life with cinammin in it, and it was so good. Then we went outside and waited untill the bus came. And me and george disided**(decided)** were**(where)** we wanted to go It was Hawaii because there are alot of bananas for me and George. We would learn the hulla dance. This was a great journal entry! I want you to work on not starting all your sentences with the word "then". Also, don't ever start a sentence with the word "and". The details in this story was great. I can really picture everything you did. Keep up the great writing, and enjoy Koda.**
 * Roxanne,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.--> Today when me and koda got to my house koda got to meet my two dogs Simon and Trinity and you should of saw them they were so exited to meet koda and koda was exited to meet them too.So when we got to my room we played dress up with my webkinz clothes he looked so funny in my winter coat i made.Then i showed koda my crazy hats and he wanted to trie one on so i let him wear one it was so funny when he put on the hat.Also after that we went to the mall and BJS and Valley Farms also JCPennys but wait theres more Kohls and Gaint to go grocery shopping also one more POPEYES for chicken and it was so awsome.When we got home we jumped in the snow and slid down a gaigantic hill it was really scarey but when we got down we awd when it because was over.When we got into the house we had some hot chocolate boy was it good.But our fun was over when we had to go to girlscouts but the fun didnt stop we had so many cookies at girlscouts that we were stuffed and we read a book and sang songs but koda missed that he was sleeping so he missed it the best part do you belive that.After we got home from girlscouts he got to meet my grammy kathy he wanted a picture with her so i let him take a picture with my grammy kathy.After he met her we made cookies it was so much fun that we mixed the ingredients all up but they turned out delicious so my mom was so suprized that we made so much cookies in the amount of twenty minutes koda and me are both fast cookers.(yawn) im tired said koda so we went to bed good night i said to everyone. Hey its the 24th thats christmas eve you should of saw koda on christmas eve he was so exited to meet my family and friends that when my grammy came over he jumped on her with exitement then he got off and sat back down with me and when my gram came up the steps she looked starteld that koda was like that then she tolled me he's weird and gave mom the grocery bags and helped put them away but before my mom even touched the bags koda wanted to help so he and me helped them bring in the grocery bags while i held the door after they were done koda was tired so we took a nap intill my family came to party but koda took a shorter nap than i did because when i woke up he was in the hall way playing with my cousin Terrence they were passing cars to each other koda thought it was fun so he played with my cousin while i helped my mom get the house clean after they were done my cousin took a nap for an hour koda was so bored that he fell alsleep on the couch but intill he heard the doorbell ring he was up and on the walls to meet my family and he was ready to party that he asked them to dance with them but none of my family would dance with him so me and my little cousin raegen did koda loved that especially when present time came and he asked to open mine so i let him open a few of them .After everyone left he was on the floor sleeping so we went to bed."Hey Hey Hey its christmas day so get up and play" koda said as he jumped on my "its christmas get up you" koda said with exitement when i opened my eyes i had to laugh because he woke up everyone else and it was so funny i laughed so hard that i fell over and said "wow your so so funny"after that i coudn't get up so my brother helped me up and we started christmas and koda got his present firt from me it was a blue t-shirt with red and white stripes on it with two buttons and a collar on webkinz it's so cute on him you should really see him with him in it then came my last present it was an oddly shaped bag with snowflakes on it and when i stuck my hand in the bag koda jumped out at me and said merry christmas to me so i huged him and thanked everyone then we went back to bed in till the doorbell rang it was my gram i open the door and said hi but i didnt see her all i saw was presents i asked her were she was and she answered so i let her in and by the time we sat down the doorbell rang again so i got up this time it was my uncle; koda jumped on him because koda likes my uncle then more people another after another to help intill there was no more to help so we started handing out presents i let koda help me open mine because he had no more presents after christmas was over we went to bed because we were so tired.The next morning we got up and whent to my moms to open my presents there and what i got was the game In a Pickle its really fun game,20Q also really fun,i also got two topia shirts,and a pair of sweat pants from my mom oh and i forgot to tell you what i got from my dads first i got a moodring,a camera,nintendo wii,eye clops,a new calender and thats it from christmas.Hi today's the 27 two days after christmas it was sort of boring because i could'nt play on webkinz because my computer screen was too small so the webpage was too small and i click anything so we watched tv for an hour untill my sister came down to play sims so we watched her play with her sims for 3 hours on the floor then she let us play untill my mom came home from bingo then we went upstairs to bed and we watched tv in my room untill midnight and we finally fell asleep and in the morning koda woke up to a wet day because my brother dumped water on us so the morning was kind of fun because we had a water fight in my room after we were all soaked so was everything else so my brother slept downstairs while me and koda watched tv then went on the computer and watched videos on yahoo music and it was fun watching my girl on meez dancing to the music it was so funny of what she was she was doing after a while we got hungry so we had some dinner from mickey dees and it was so good after koda was done he wanted mine so i let him eat some of mine that was left then we got kicked out of kids catsle for having a stuffed animal in the castle it scared everyone to death so they screamed and thats how i got kicked out of kids castle after we drove home me and koda were sleeping in the car so my mom woke us up and we went to bed.BRING BRING the phone rang its my cousin i answered the phone and said hi and let koda say hi to her then she asked if i can come over and i said sure so i went with koda to my cousins house and we played bratz untill her brother's friend came home from wendys and we were saying our dreams and who ever said the word  like first lost the bet. So i lost the bet because my cousin kept saying like so i said it and lost the bet then she came up with the plan that i sleep over so i called my mom and asked and she said yes so i slept over.So it was the best night ever we played cops and robbers for 3 hours we went on my wii to create people and there were like hudreds and hudreds of people in it that i had to delete some that were my favorite singers just for my cousin and that was uncool man they were the best out of of them then my uncle Ricky came down to say goodnight to us and i said goodnight so did my cousin Courtney and we went to sleep.The next day we hid under the bed from my uncle Steven and aunt Annaleasa untill she found us running across the hall to hide somewere else and that was it with hiding because it went to spying on my two uncles plumbing it was'nt easy spying on two good listeners so we gave up on that because my cousin thought that koda was to noisey so she threw him and i caught him before he touched the ground and he said "good catch girl" and i said thank you after that my cousins mom came and i went home for my dad to pick me up and go home then.Also we want to be a leppard because there fast and.