Little+Leo+19

Great writing. I like how you used quotes around who was speaking. I need to show you the quotation mark key on the computer because you are using two apostrophes. Stop by when you read this. Also, don't forget to put a comma after sequencing words like "First, then, next, finally." It seemed like you two had a great time together. I am sure he will want to come visit again.
 * What did you and Little Leo do together? Make sure you read over your journal entry about Cuddles and look for suggestions that I made. Do not make the same mistakes. Also, make sure you use details in your story but not too many. Start Writing here--> ​** First Little Leo and I where picked up by my mom**(. Then,)**then we went to my house. When Little Leo got into my room he said it looked just like Cuddles told him it would look like. Then**** Little Leo saw my computer and he wanted to play on it. Little Leo said he wanted to go on webkinz but I said ``We can`t because my computer screen is to small``. ( My computer is a Gateway.) So Little Leo said**(, "What)** what else can we go on? Then**** I asked Little Leo if he wanted to see my Glogster and he said ``Sure``. ( P.S I have a picture on the bottom.) When Little Leo saw my glog he wanted to go on my link to My writing with Cuddles and I said ``Ok``. Little Leo said he really liked it and he couldn't wait until he sees the writing that I do with him. After that**** I checked my e-mail. I had one new message. Little Leo wanted to know who it was from and what is**(it)** said. Then I said, ''It`s from Gina and it says**(, No, I'm)**no i`m doing my homework**** call me at 5:00. Little Leo looked confused so I told him that I wrote to Gina a message that said, **("Should)**should I call you now? Then**** Little Leo didn`t look so confused anymore. Then, Little Leo saw my **(DS)**ds and he wanted to try it. I said "Sure." I told Little Leo he could pick the game he wanted to play. Little Leo said he couldn`t read so I had to tell him what games I had. **(You should have taught him how to read)** I said " I have Spongbob Squarepants Drawn to Life, Clubpenguin, and My Sims Kingdom. Then, Little Leo said to me that he wanted to play My Sims Kingdom. Little Leo and I had a fun time playing on my ds (P.S I have a picture on the bottom.) After that Little Leo saw all my other pets (stuffed animals) and he wanted to play with them. Little Leo said he had a great time with them. Then**** my mom told me she wanted Little Leo and I to come watch a show with her. Little Leo, My mom,and I watched Ghost Wisperer**(Whisperer)**. Little Leo didn`t get scared he actualy**(actually)** enjoyed it. Then**(Then)** Little Leo and I had to go to bed. It was ok with Little Leo because he was sleepy. Then, we woke up and brushed our teeth, got dressed, brushed our hair, and ate breakfast. For breakfast Little Leo and I ate a **(English Muffin)**english muffin ( We split it.) After that Little Leo and I came to school. Little Leo got exited when he got to school because he wanted to see Mr.Bigley and Ms. Kastura. Little Leo and I had a great time together!
 * Sage,



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