Madison


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**

Start writing here. ->Me and George played on webkinz for about 15 minuets. Then we had scool**(school0** with my other webkinz pets. Then we went upstairs for dinner, had the same thing as the night before, spagetii**(spaghetti)** and meatballs! Then we had a spelling bee and George won the spelling bee! Then we ate dessret**(dessert)**, we had cookie dough ice cream! Then he slept in the speacil**(special)** bed that I gave to Mr.Bigley. I really like your writing. I am sorry that for some reason your first draft did not get saved. I am glad you have such a great memory. One thing I want you to work on is to not start all your sentences with the word "then". It makes everything sound repetitive. Other words will also give it more feeling. Also, thanks for the the bed. Koda and George really like it, but George told me that he is ready for everyone to take Koda so he does not have to share it.**
 * Madison,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->When I was packed up Koda was ready to go on the bus. Then we got to daycare and there he read and played with the floam. When we got home Koda met all my other Webkinz. He even met my underwater pet,Shamoo. Then he played with all the Webkinz till it was time for dinner. Then he got ready for bed and fell asleep. On Saturday morning Koda and I ate french toast, then we went down stairs and played the Wii. After we played the Wii we went to a movie, we saw Hotel For Dogs. He really liked the movie, but he thought it should be Hotel For Koda. So after the movie we played on the computer. Koda was really tired so he took a nap. When he woke up it was time for dinner. Then Koda met my friend Angie.Me,Angie,And Koda played until we fell asleep. Then Koda had breakfast and played Hide n' Go Seek. Later on Koda wanted to go back to daycare so me and Angie made Koda a new toy that he loved. He was so happy he started to run around in circles. He ran so much and got so tired he fell asleep downstairs. When he woke up he got right out of bed and got ready for daycare. At daycare he played with all my friends and love it. And when he got home we played until it was time for Angie to go home. After we took Angie home we went to D n'D. He liked it there. There was a bed with a slide! He slid down the slide and landed on the floor. Then we headed home and Koda fell asleep right away.