Jadyn

====**What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**====

Start writing here. ->We played video games and watched tv. We saw the Zohan. After that we went bike riding. We went on vacation to Harrisburg my cousins and went swiming in the in-ground pool for two days in a row. Then we went the game room and played basktball, ping pong, pool, and air hockey. We played borad games too. Two of the games were The Game Of Life and Imagineiff. Our most favorite activity together was when him and I played the gutiar. For vacation we want to go to Georgia because that`s where I was born in Georgia. There is nice wheather **(weather)** there. It`s always hot. It was like in the 90`s most of the time and there were a lot of hotels that had swiming pools. I used to go to a lot of hotels. I went to the store Sheet`s and we got a slim jim. We whatched Drake and Josh,Spongebob Squarepants and ate cupcakes. We got the cupcakes from famliy night. We won a lot of stuff. We won a mini stove,cupcakes,spongebob kit, and a DVD autograghed. We were thinking about Halloween costumes and I am going to be a vampire. We were playing the Wii. The games we were playing was bowling, baseball, boxing, and tennis it was fun. George was riding on my brother`s and sister`s little riding cars. My sister kept taking George.

This was a very good summary of what you did. You two seemed two have a great time. I think you took George to the most places. He loved it. I think you may have been the only person who told me where you and George want to go on vacation. I am gladded you followed my directions. THe only suggestion I would add is that you should put that answer at the end of what you and George did. I think Koda is going to be excited to go with you.**
 * Jadyn,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->Koda and I were outside playing in the snow and throwing snowballs. later we played X-box the game we played was Tony Hawk Amrican Wastland. When I went to my mom`s and we did Wii Fit and did skiing. Koda and I then practice gutiar we played some songs and listend to some music on the radio. I would wanna be a cheetah because they run really fast up to 70 miles and could and their good at catching there preys. Koda and I had shovle and crack the ice with a medal shovle we had to pick up the ice when we were done. Then we to do more chores like take out the trash to the side of the house clean are room. Then we got to sit down again when I was at my dad`s Koda was playing with my dog Twyla we were throwing the bone so Twyla would go get it and when I would bounce the tennis ball Twyla would try to jump in the and catch it.