Shilah


 * What did you do last night with George? Tell me where you went, what you did, who you saw, and about the most exciting activity together. I also want you to tell me where you and George would like to go on vacation and why. Remember, don't leave any information out of your story and write in complete sentences.**

Start writing here. ->George and I watched TV.We watched thats so Ravne and George Lopez. I hope I can get him again. He met my Webkinz and now there**(they're)** friends.All three of us saw a moive.It was The Thirteenth Year. It was not that bad.But we saw it anyways.On webkinz me and George went to work.We played doctor.It was confusing to play a doctor but I made it.Next we did Curio shop. I did not get any gems.Then we went to search for stars. I found a star.Last we went to the clubhouse. I played links and webkinz pool.I made a bed for George on my bed. He liked it. He and I had ice tea and peanutbutter**(peanut butter)** and banana.He love it.He can not wait to go with Taya. This was a great journal entry. I can see you doing all these things with George. I fixed a few misspelled words, and I want you to work on put a space between the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next. Besides that everything was great. Don't worry, you will most likely get George again, but first you need to be ready for Koda.**
 * Shilah,

Before you start writing read over your last entry and my suggestions to you. Try to make this one better then the last one. Don’t forget to answer all my questions.**
 * What did you do with Koda last night? Tell me where you went, who you saw, and about all the fun you had. Please do not leave out a detail. Also, if you could be an animal, what animal would you be and why?

Start writing here.-->Koda and I had so much fun.We went to go pick up my mom .Wile we were wating for her we were dancing in the car .When we got home we saw a movie it was called Eagle Eye and when we saw it we were eating candy.Then we ate dinner we had rice and fish we watch TV wile we were eating.We saw CSI Miami it was akward.We went to a store me and him got bananas with icecream we had a icecream sunday. We read a story it was called Henry's Freedom Box.The whole in tier story was sad he was a slave. Then we brush ower teeth and to bed.When we woke up the next morning.we had to get ready he helped me make eggs and pancakes.We played Hide and go Seek and we played Go Fish.Me and him went over my spelling words.And if I could be an animal I would be a snow owl